FP rough edit GONE and feedback

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FEEDBACK:
  • Nice sound bleed over into establishing shots
  • change the speed on the fats pan
  • look at potential dissolves for last establishing shot
  • another layer of sound effects for when inside warehouse
  • good flash back effect
  • work on disjointed effect for struggling with tape
  • music and sound effects for important tension moments
  • nice establishing shots
  • like the sound of the birds as it brings out the side of innocence and the unknown
  • add credits and an ending
  • change the sound or add sound when you see the bad guy
MY RESPONSE:
  • I agree with everything everyone has mentioned
  • I have added dissolves and slowed down the fast pan
  • i will add the disjointed feel with the struggling of tape
  • i will add more sound in tension moments
  • i need to add credits and a title and my after effects 

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