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Hi Porcia
ReplyDeleteOverall Score: 18/20
Well done in your research and analysis of opening sequences. You have provided a good amount of information, commenting on each of the 4 technical areas. Focusing on depth of analysis - the 'what does this mean' question after each observation and 'what effect does what I'm observing, have on the audience?' will help you get that next level of detail.
Well done :)